Monument Soul

to his ghetto cousin ray-rays house to file his life insurance and eat dog for the last time before he...

when a child’s innocence is lost the whole world is condemned in his broken heart the past is blurred and reduced to the ashes of a lost haven the present ...

chilling and radiant such a beatiful theme it's so dangerous i'm so scared because I'm afraid it will happen to me there is someone I love that I had to ...

...hmm... I don't know about this one... poems were always meant to tell people things, and usually they always kept this mystique about their themes. your poem was very straight ...

this poem says alot yet says very little. (you can interpret that both in a good and bad way) you said something profoud but, you say enough...but to add more ...

:shock: oooooHHH interesting!!!! very interesting... creepy...a love of death and the dead alike I mean...I don't know what to say to something like THAT... that's just an okay thing...keep being ...

:? I think I'm a man..... *checks* :!:

I think I have it now... strange story...very very interesting...I guess it's pretty good... I'd like to see more of you...then I'll understand your character... this writing is a secret ...

:? hmm....what? I read this work and didn't feel what you were trying to tell me. interesting settings...icky transitions...(the way I saw it at first) you state one by using ...

A mask, when we smile for our parents A mask, when we laugh for our friends A mask, when we grimace at class work A mask, when we come to ...

Foresight inspires insight does it not!? :) I don't know how or want to review you on stuff like grammar but can review you on what you're trying to say!!! ...

hmmm... well done krupp!! another lesson taught through poetry. imagery was a little off, but you got the point across. it reminds of a specific section in one of my ...

I think that your concept is a bit much of it....this doesn't belong to poetry for its style... I mean, this ruins your rhythm totally...actually there isn't any rhythm... This ...

There's something very special about this poem. I don't know what, maybe it's the slight abstractness of it, maybe it's the fact that it's on a huge level (if taken ...

A Love Amongst the Spheres Delivers The Mountain and The Meteor (pt.1 Romancing Planets) Out in the endless sea of stars and ether lived the spheres Like us, they were ...